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[Mulan Kinetic Typography]

Interesting

I like it. I have a few tips, to counter "patrickliberty" below me...

Some change in color throughout would be good, for instance when you change from horizontal text to vertical, it's a bit hard to follow. Changing the letter within the horizontal word that begins the vertical one would help the eye to follow it.

I like the font change in the middle, where there are others speaking, but I think changing the font mid-sentence to match the words or their meanings would work really well. For instance, flaming text when he says "fire"?

If possible, some sort of background other than white would be nice. Maybe clips from the movie if you can? (I'm not sure if thats even legal... but maybe find out?)

But yeah, really nice typography! Good job!

kazoodac responds:

Thank you very much for the review! You have successfully countered the one below!

hahaha anyway, all of your suggestions are things I did consider when making this piece, but I didn't want to risk making it too complicated. They are all good ideas, I just didn't know if I'd be able to implement them successfully.

As for movie clips, it's already probably illegal using the song, lets not push it! haha

Thanks again!